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April 23rd, 2004, 11:33 AM
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Ray is a typical teenager(13-15yr old). He wants complete freedom. Once he
wants to stay away from home and his dad does not allow him. Ray fights for
his rights. His father submits to his demands. Even allows an extra pocket
money to Ray after an intense heated argument, just to appease Ray.
Ray thinks his kid brother is shit brat. He does not miss an opportunity to
drag him down. He generally bullies his kid bro.
Ray's mom is a typical mom. Always paying heed to what he wants. Never ever
trying to stop him from doing anything wrong.
In general every where he goes Ray has his way. At home, At college every
where. He takes on to drugs.
When his condition deteriorates and he has no hope left, he starts becoming
even more obstinate. he takes them openly even in front of his parents.
Parents initially try to get him straight, but slowly they give up too.
One night his drugs are finished. He wants more. He asks father for money.
When his father does not give it, and admonishes him. Ray says that all around
him his family, friends are responsible what he is today. he is not to blame.
Says that he would have been better if he wud have born on the street. Shouts
at every body and goes out of the house.
Ray steals money that night from his own home and has drugs goes to sleep on
the street.
Ray gets up in the morning. But to find that everyone around him has changed.
The parents, friends, all the people around him looks exactly him. Infact it
is Ray in everyones body. The body is his mothers, but the mind, the head is
Ray's.
Every one behaves as Ray towards Ray and towards each other. In this Ray
realizes what mistake he has done.
And the sun rises. But Ray lies dead on the street.
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